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« on: November 12, 2004, 03:15:31 AM »
As long as I have put it off, I've decided to give you a little taste of some of the banter so far. I just updated the site, with the only major changes being me adding +1 to his wis and int (banter sounding too wise and intelligent for someone with 10 and 8 int and wis respectively Tongue), doubled the size of the FAQ, and added these banter samples. I'm not sure about the wording and stuff of a couple, but I'd just like to know what everyone thinks about it so far. Just note: He is note always as crazy and chaotic as a couple of these might sound, but he has his moments... Wink

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« Reply #1 on: November 21, 2004, 08:00:37 PM »
Arcajarn sounds like Edwin to me.

I can't put my finger on it, but Keldorn's characterization seems to be slightly off.
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« Reply #2 on: November 21, 2004, 08:04:13 PM »
Quote from: Rastor on November 21, 2004, 08:00:37 PM
Arcajarn sounds like Edwin to me.
At times, yes. Not all of the time though.

Quote from: Rastor on November 21, 2004, 08:00:37 PM
I can't put my finger on it, but Keldorn's characterization seems to be slightly off.
Yeah, I can't seem to get any of the LG characters right. Any suggestions?
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« Reply #3 on: November 22, 2004, 10:01:40 PM »
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"Without my glasses, I see the world as it really is: kinda blurry."

My Title was written when I was in a particularily silly mood.  I will change it--once I come up with another, even more absurd title.

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« Reply #4 on: November 22, 2004, 10:18:53 PM »
I should really check out the banter in NI, I don't usually have Keldorn in my party (even though he's one of he three most powerful NPCs in the game).

Thanks for the help and thanks for the compliment.  Smiley
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« Reply #5 on: November 22, 2004, 10:33:29 PM »
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"Watch your tongue, dark one.  I will not have my daughters spoken of in such a crude manner."

That sounds like Keldorn.

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« Reply #6 on: November 22, 2004, 10:49:37 PM »
Heh, that means three of Keldorn four lines in that coversation are going to be rewritten. I thought that the last one was the only one that didn't sound right. Oh well.

Anyway, are the other two banters fine? (With Sarevok, Edwin)
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« Reply #7 on: November 22, 2004, 11:00:12 PM »
I think Sarevok's banter is good, but this one line in the Edwin banter struck me as odd:

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« Reply #8 on: November 22, 2004, 11:05:00 PM »
Haha, that is good. I'll do something like that. Yeah, I'm not used to Edwin since he is my second least used character after Cernd. (Even when I play evil, I just use Jan or Nalia as a mage instead. Don't ask why.)

Thanks for the help people, I'll fix these (and one or two other already written banters). Just gotta get used to the way some characters talk and behave, that's all.
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« Reply #9 on: November 22, 2004, 11:06:32 PM »
Quote from: maximize20 on November 22, 2004, 11:05:00 PM
Thanks for the help people, I'll fix these (and one or two other already written banters). Just gotta get used to the way some characters talk and behave, that's all.

No problem. Smiley
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